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PostSubject: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Tue Jun 04, 2013 1:05 pm

You probably get this ad nauseum, but if I write this, will you take a look at it?

The movie is a Death Wish style rape-revenge movie. A female prosecutor is trying to take down the mob in her city, and they've repeatedly tried to bribe her into backing down, but she keeps refusing. So, one night, while she's busy in court, the boss has her whole family killed, except for her teenage daughter, who's gang-raped into a coma. In retaliation, she gets ahold of a shotgun, and goes after them one by one, with the help of a hooker who has connections to the mob in question. The really big gore scene would be when the main character sodomize's the boss' son, who anally raped her daughter, with the shotgun's barrel, greasing it up and everything, before firing it inside him.

And the capper is the soundtrack, which would have a number of great songs, mostly from the eighties.

Some of the songs I have in mind:

Metropolis - The Darkest Side of the Night(Opening credits theme)
Dan Hartman - I Can Dream About You
Joe Walsh - In The City
John Cafferty and the Beaver Brown Band: On The Dark Side
Firehouse - Hold Your Fire
Alphaville - Jet Set(I figured you'd appreciate this one.)
The Fixx - Red Skies
Eddie & The Tide - Power Play
Deep Purple - The Battle Rages On
Hole - Violet(Closing credits)

So, want me to write it?
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Wed Jun 05, 2013 3:20 am

RandyPan wrote:
You probably get this ad nauseum, but if I write this, will you take a look at it?

The movie is a Death Wish style rape-revenge movie. A female prosecutor is trying to take down the mob in her city, and they've repeatedly tried to bribe her into backing down, but she keeps refusing. So, one night, while she's busy in court, the boss has her whole family killed, except for her teenage daughter, who's gang-raped into a coma. In retaliation, she gets ahold of a shotgun, and goes after them one by one, with the help of a hooker who has connections to the mob in question. The really big gore scene would be when the main character sodomize's the boss' son, who anally raped her daughter, with the shotgun's barrel, greasing it up and everything, before firing it inside him.

And the capper is the soundtrack, which would have a number of great songs, mostly from the eighties.

Some of the songs I have in mind:

Metropolis - The Darkest Side of the Night(Opening credits theme)
Dan Hartman - I Can Dream About You
Joe Walsh - In The City
John Cafferty and the Beaver Brown Band: On The Dark Side
Firehouse - Hold Your Fire
Alphaville - Jet Set(I figured you'd appreciate this one.)
The Fixx - Red Skies
Eddie & The Tide - Power Play
Deep Purple - The Battle Rages On
Hole - Violet(Closing credits)

So, want me to write it?
i say yes. it sounds like my kind of movie. If i lived in MA and not Puerto rico id probally ask to be in it lol
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Wed Jun 05, 2013 4:29 am

I actually see Maggie Gyllenhaal as the lead, because she's my favorite actress, and she's fucking awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:29 pm

You sure you can tear yourself away from posting and "having fun" with all of those nude scenes you were going on about a few days ago? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 3:35 am

Awwww, aren't you a clever chap?

Run along and go fap to some more movie nudies....
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 6:17 am

Fuck that, I've got real porno.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 6:47 am

....I know you think that was some kind of brilliant comeback, but.....it's really more sad then anything....

I'll let you figure out why...
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:20 am

That wasn't meant as a comeback, that was me defusing the argument.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:25 am

Could have fooled me....

And PS: I originally was just making a joke, but you went ahead and posted your little smart ass reply/video, and things went from there...
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:35 am

How about you tell me what you think of my movie idea before this thread gets deleted?
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 8:46 am

Eeeeeeh, it's pretty much like every other revenge-sploitation movie from the 70's-80's, not like its very original or anything...
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:14 am

Yeah, cause once you've seen one revengesploitation movie, you've seen 'em all.  Isn't that this site's philosophy?
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:40 am

RandyPan

Asks me for my opinion on his movie idea

Proceeds to get pissy when I tell him my honest opinion...
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:58 am

I didn't say I wouldn't rebut.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:15 am

*Nods*

Yep.....I definitely don't like you RandyMarziPan....

You have quite an attitude problem

Also quite condescending....

So yeah, congrats on being the first person on here I genuinely dislike....
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:34 pm

Look, let's just agree we're both acting like douches and knock it off.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 6:56 pm

Seriously Frank, I usually enjoy your posts but you're really coming across as this thread's twat. Knock it off.
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PostSubject: Re: Movie I'm thinking of writing.   Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:46 pm

*Shrug*

It's only due to Randy's attitude Subterfuge, not just in this thread, but all of his posts, nothing more, nothing less.
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